高考英語滿分作文

高考英語滿分作文

作文題目
假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：
2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).

　　I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
　　Hope you will come here soon!
　　All the best!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua

滿分理由

　　本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

Dear Bob,
　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
　　Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, 　　see you.
　　Best wishes !
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Hua

滿分理由

　　本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。